Tuesday 21 February 2012

Hw2


Creative Writting
Best friends, school, late at night, something embarrassing happens.

It was a cold, stormy night at the Rose Brook high school as a young man was walking the grounds. My names Alex Parker and this is my story. There was no real reason for me to be at school but I was bored and needed a bit of fun.

 The school was deserted, empty, full of nothingness and very creepy. Luckily for me the gate was left open making my job a lot easier not having to climb the fence. As I walked through the school I kept hearing noises as if someone was following me but I kept on walking. When I got to the centre of the school I met up with one of my best mates Jacob. We met that night on the sole purpose to tag the school grounds with our sign aTc. We geared up with our spray cans and set of around the school.

We split up and started tagging. As I headed towards the wall I was going to tag I heard another strange sound this time like someone was talking to me. A looked around for someone, thinking someone had saw me but there was no one; I carried on. I was getting more and more nervous as the night rolled on I started hearing more and more spooky noises so I decided to go find Jacob and get out of the school and head home. I scrambled through the schooling looking for Jacob but he was nowhere to be found. I started hearing even more noises, getting louder and louder. I started running yelling “Jacob where are you!” over and over again, there was no response. I kept rushing through the school but there was no sign of him. The sounds were getting even louder I thought I heard something behind me so I looked behind me. Nek minit

I looked up and there was Jacob laughing his face off, I had ran into a wall. Jacob had been following me the whole time making all the noises. I hated him for next few months, but our friendship prevailed and we stayed friends.


1 comment:

  1. Cool story :)
    This sentence needs fixing: ". A looked around for someone, thinking someone had saw me but there was no one; I carried on."
    Catchy start.

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